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Old February 23rd, 2004, 11:01 AM
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Default Re: Winter Wish

Rollerdonna, your paragraph has a poetry of its own. I appreciate your feelings about the cold, as I have spent too many winters in the north. That's why I love living in South Texas in the winter.

The meter is messed up on the first line of my last verse. It would read more smoothly as "We share the pleasures that this earth provides."
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