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Paul B May 3rd, 2013 03:58 PM

New Verse
I'm not entirely satisfied with this one, since the verse scheme made it difficult to compose.


When I see the ocean,
It just feels me with emotion,
And it makes me want to sing,
On a carousel that's spinning,
And I know that I am winning
Cause I've caught the golden ring.

There's a ship that I am meeting.
I'll receive a cordial greeting
As I slowly make my way.
Then soon I will be cruising.
The vacation that I'm choosing
Will most surely make my day.

To cruise among the fishes
Is among my fondest wishes
And great pleasure plays its part.
There is no compromising
When the silver moon is rising
And it warms my waking heart.

Luanne Russo May 4th, 2013 02:33 PM

Paul, I love it.

ToddDH May 4th, 2013 03:15 PM

As does Luanne,I love it also. Truth be told, I never enjoyed (nor probably understood) poetry until you came along. So at least you'll be pleased that you have made an educational difference in someone's life.

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